Grow the stuff of empathy
Cultivate compassion too
Nurture love and helpfulness
Bring concord into view
To propagate a garden
In life that smells so sweet
Full of flowers and natures goodness
To grace each one you meet
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Life’s Garden
June 6, 2015
Comments on: "Life’s Garden" (2)
I am not a big fan of ‘stuff’ and here it feels wrong to me – I like the rest 100% just feel that you could put a more Naturalistic word like ‘seeds’ just my thoughts for what they are. Feel free to ignore and keep writing – as always it’s your poem and you choose the words G:)
Thanks for your comments as always Graeme 🙂