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Train Tracks

Me
Sat there
Waiting for
The train to stop
But where’s it comes from
And where’s it going to
Nobody knows nor bothers
For journey’s end is not the point
But more so the track we navigate
For that puts the clickety clack in life

I saw this challenge on a fellow bloggers site, painttheworldwithwords.wordpress.com, and thought I’d have a go at writing an Etheree.  Why not click on their link to find out more and have a go too.  

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Comments on: "Train Tracks" (11)

  1. True that! I like how we can word such thoughtful stuff in such small format. You did really well. I liked your message and indeed the journey is what matters!

    Thanks for your participation 🙂

    Regards

  2. I love this! I’m so sad I missed this prompt because I love the etheree. 🙂

  3. […] Note: This poem is an Etheree, starting with one syllable on the first line and increasing to 10, one syllable per line.For another great example, check out Ginz&Tonic. […]

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